I don't understand what should I do now !

[solayman_khan_x]

I'm a writer. I gig on ghostwriting. I customized my gigs as well as I can.

55 days have passed but I have not received any order.

 I don't understand what the hidden problem I should catch and fix. 

Can anyone gimme advice?
It will help me a lot.

Thanks !

[uk1000]

You have a gig with a title of "I will write short story for childrens". I think that title could be improved grammatically.

In your "I will be your food recipes, food articles and food blogs writer" gig
In the description the first thing it says is "Welcome to my recipe writing gig!" - what if they wanted a food blog written (without a recipe) and the first thing they see is that line about it being a recipe writing gig?

The gig description also says "My recipe writing service includes:" - but then it lists things like food articles - which might not necessarily be/include a recipe. It also lists "Take out & Restaurant Reviews" as one of the things your service includes, but the Fiverr community standards says that writing paid reviews isn't allowed, so you may not be allowed to offer writing of "Take out & Restaurant Reviews".

edit: Also look how your gig images/video thumbnails show on your profile - I'd make sure text is all visible in them.

Edited May 7 by uk1000

[solayman_khan_x]

2 minutes ago, uk1000 said:

You have a gig with a title of "I will write short story for childrens". I think that title could be improved grammatically.

In your "I will be your food recipes, food articles and food blogs writer" gig
In the description the first thing it says is "Welcome to my recipe writing gig!" - what if they wanted a food blog written (without a recipe) and the first thing they see is that line about it being a recipe writing gig?

The gig description also says "My recipe writing service includes:" - but then it lists things like food articles - which might not necessarily be/include a recipe. It also lists "Take out & Restaurant Reviews" as one of the things your service includes, but the Fiverr community standards says that writing paid reviews isn't allowed, so you may not be allowed to offer writing of "Take out & Restaurant Reviews".

Thanks and what about the two ghostwriting gigs? 

[mariashtelle1]

4 minutes ago, solayman_khan_x said:

Thanks and what about the two ghostwriting gigs? 

If I’m not so polite as @uk1000 then I’ll just say that your English is not there to offer any writing gigs. And people can see it. That’s why they are not buying your services. 

[uk1000]

13 minutes ago, solayman_khan_x said:

Thanks and what about the two ghostwriting gigs? 

You could check the video thumbnail doesn't have text that gets cut off on the profile.

They're a bit duplicated. You have one gig for "be your ghostwriter for ebook" and one for "be your ghostwriter for non fiction books and ebooks".

So you're offering ghostwriting for ebooks in both of those. It might be better to make each gig more unqiue. Maybe the title of the "I will be your ghostwriter for ebook" could be changed a bit.

In "I will be your ghostwriter for ebook" the first package has unlimited revisions and the higher priced ones have 1 revision. I'd remove unlimited revisions (make it a fixed number) and also it might be better if the higher priced package had a few more revisions (basically the higher priced packages usually offer at more or at least as many as the lower priced one).

Edited May 7 by uk1000

[shobuj_77]

51 minutes ago, mariashtelle1 said:

If I’m not so polite as @uk1000 then I’ll just say that your English is not there to offer any writing gigs. And people can see it. That’s why they are not buying your services. 

Well said!