Please give your expert opinion on my gig

[marketer_azlan]

Please give your expert opinions on my created. So I can find a path to improve myself.https://www.fiverr.com/share/lmN3Lb

Appreciate your time ☺️☺️

[uk1000]

I'm not an expert but here's some suggestions:

The video says "Digital Marketing Stratery" at 0:19 - I'd change that

The gig description says "but can guarantee website traffic.". I think promotion is okay but I'm not sure you should be guaranteeing traffic.