I would like to have your opinion on my 3D rendering work

[fabiohusson]

Hello, 

I just registered on Fiverr and I offer my skills in modeling and 3D rendering of furniture. 

I don't have any customers yet, that's why I would like to have your opinion on my models and my Fiverr page in order to improve and correct my mistakes. 

I wish you a nice day. 

Fabio 

[imagination7413]

So, you only render? No designing?

You gig title could use improvement. The word 'do' is rather weak. Think like a Buyer: if you were buying your service, what would you type in the search bar?

https://www.fiverr.com/support/articles/360011094958-SEO-tricks-for-gig-titles 

[fabiohusson]

10 hours ago, imagination7413 said:

Alors, vous ne faites que rendre? Pas de conception ?

Le titre de votre concert pourrait être amélioré. Le mot 'faire' est plutôt faible. Pensez comme un acheteur : si vous achetiez votre service, que saisiriez-vous dans la barre de recherche ?

https://www.fiverr.com/support/articles/360011094958-SEO-tricks-for-gig-titles 

You are right! I do design and 3D rendering of furniture. I need to change that in my title. 
Thanks for your help.