Pls, review my gigs and help improve them

[ajkennyweb]

Hi! I joined Fiver a couple of months ago but traffic has been quite slow. I've only had 2 orders which got excellent reviews. 

Gig 1

https://www.fiverr.com/ajkennyweb/carefully-proofread-and-edit-your-book

Gig 2

https://www.fiverr.com/ajkennyweb/proofreading-and-copy-editing-extraordinaire

If you could take a few minutes to review my gigs and tell me what I'm doing wrong or where to improve, I'd greatly appreciate it. 

[imagination7413]

The package names are cute, but anyone who doesn't read the classics will probably have no clue what they mean. Also your images are rather wordy. If you view them from your profile, you can see how they'll look as thumbnails. The text is too small to read.

https://www.fiverr.com/support/articles/4410883326481-Gig-image-guidelines-Making-the-most-of-your-Gig-image?segment=seller

Have you tried reading your gig descriptions out loud? It's a good method for checking readability.

[uk1000]

In the "I will copyedit and proofread your text" gig the 2nd gig image says "...improve your book." - but apart from the image colours it's the same as in the "I will copyedit and proofread your books" gig. So I don't know whether the "improve your book" image should be in the "I will copyedit and proofread your text" gig since if they want their book improved they'd go to your other gig.

In the "I will copyedit and proofread your books" gig on the profile the "LINE EDIT" bit of text seems to get cropped slightly on the left (maybe move the text slightly in and/or check the image aspect ratio).

[ajkennyweb]

Thank you both for your replies. I've already started making changes based on your comments.