Improve my gig

[ashmitraj493]

Published my gig on 23 - 24 december , 1st day i git 31 impressions and 4 clicks 2nd day I got 9 impressions 0 clicks , And 3rd day I got 24 impressions and 0 clicks ,Today i made some changes in tags and it jumped my gig from last page to 4th page of local sellers category then too I am sending my gig link plz check it and see what improvements can be made if you wanna suggest some tags also share what type of tags I should use , Please help ! 

https://www.fiverr.com/share/DodE8y 

This is the link 

[uk1000]

Here's some suggestions:

Gig: I will design modern professional business presentation design
In the title I'm not sure you need the last "design" - ie. if you're designing a presentation.
In the gig description:
"assist and Gguide you" could be "assist and guide you"
"Why to choose us ?" could be "Why choose us?"
"I can ." could be "I can."

In the profile:
In the description: "to our clients , We have successfully" could be "to our clients. We have successfully"

[ashmitraj493]

Other things including tags, thumbnails are doing good? Anyways , Thanks for suggestions

[uk1000]

14 minutes ago, ashmitraj493 said:

Other things including tags, thumbnails are doing good?

The main gig image could be slightly less compressed eg. in the top right corner around "PPT" it could look a bit sharper.

In the search tags I think they'd be more likely to search for "business presentation" than "businesspresentation".

In the 2nd FAQ question there's no "?" at the end of the sentence but there is in the other 2 questions.

Also with the FAQ questions it doesn't seem consistent who is asking. In the 2nd question it seems like the buyer is asking with "Should I expect..." but on the last question it says "Are we new on fiverr ?". If the buyer asked wouldn't they say "Are you new on Fiverr?"?

[ashmitraj493]

10 minutes ago, uk1000 said:

The main gig image could be slightly less compressed eg. in the top right corner around "PPT" it could look a bit sharper.

In the search tags I think they'd be more likely to search for "business presentation" than "businesspresentation".

In the 2nd FAQ question there's no "?" at the end of the sentence but there is in the other 2 questions.

Also with the FAQ questions it doesn't seem consistent who is asking. In the 2nd question it seems like the buyer is asking with "Should I expect..." but on the last question it says "Are we new on fiverr ?". If the buyer asked wouldn't they say "Are you new on Fiverr?"?

Thanks , in tags part i did "Businesspresentation" And not " Business presentation" because it shows " More than 20 alphabet limit exceeded " So I removed the space between business and presentation 

And thanks for the FAQ section , I really thought making some changes in it and you helped me find the mistakes , If there are any more suggestions then plz feel free to help me