New Seller Help me to improve my GIG, Please!

[mubasharnaqvi]

i would appreciate if any senior have a look into my Gig and suggest me corrections.

here is the link

https://www.fiverr.com/mubasharnaqvi/create-optimize-and-manage-amazon-ppc-campaigns-or-amazon-sponsored-ads

[vickiespencer]

You have spelling and grammar issues. I suggest you run your text through an app to check that. Also, your gig image has too much content. Buyers are busy and do not want to take the time to stop to read every gig thumbnail. You need to hook them in to click on your gig with an image that has hat the most 5 bold words. . 

[sparkledesigner]

17 minutes ago, vickiespencer said:

You have spelling and grammar issues. I suggest you run your text through an app to check that. Also, your gig image has too much content. Buyers are busy and do not want to take the time to stop to read every gig thumbnail. You need to hook them in to click on your gig with an image that has hat the most 5 bold words. . 

well said.

[mubasharnaqvi]

thank you for the valuable suggestions. i made some corrections as per your advice. can you please check back again and let me know if still anything need to be corrected!

[vickiespencer]

Hello, @mubasharnaqvi,

I took a second look at your gig description and it looks much better! So is your gig image!