Hello! New seller here, would be happy to receive constructive criticism on my gig.

[pen_dimii]

Hello!

I'm a creative writer and I would like to hear your thoughts on my gigs - suggestions, criticism and the like.

https://www.fiverr.com/share/Yy6YAK

https://www.fiverr.com/share/17z06r

https://www.fiverr.com/share/oBYvlg

https://www.fiverr.com/share/qkld1l

https://www.fiverr.com/share/XmYNyP

 

Yhyh I know...5 gigs!!!😂😗😗😗

[ahmwritingco]

I like that you've included examples of your writing. Every writer has a different voice, so it's good that potential buyers get to experience yours. 

Could you improve your gig images? On my screen, they appear blurry and low-res. I can't even read the writing clearly in your blurb gig image.

[arafat_amin914]

welcome

[uk1000]

These are my suggestions/comments:

If you change any of the gig images maybe make them around 1.619:1 aspect ratio so they won't crop much on the profile/search results.

Gig: I will write or rewrite your captivating children short story

The basic package description starts with a lower case word "a" but the standard and premium ones start with an upper case one. Maybe make them all use the upper case "a".

In the FAQ section:
"I dont have" could be "I don't have" in question 4.

Gig: I will write beautiful and soulful poetry
The sample document has the word "was" word split with "w" one one line and "as" on the next but with no "-" to show it's wrapping.

In the profile:
In the skills section:
Skill "content writing" is duplicated. Maybe remove the one without the check mark.

[pen_dimii]

On 9/18/2021 at 12:43 PM, uk1000 said:

These are my suggestions/comments:

If you change any of the gig images maybe make them around 1.619:1 aspect ratio so they won't crop much on the profile/search results.

Gig: I will write or rewrite your captivating children short story

The basic package description starts with a lower case word "a" but the standard and premium ones start with an upper case one. Maybe make them all use the upper case "a".

In the FAQ section:
"I dont have" could be "I don't have" in question 4.

Gig: I will write beautiful and soulful poetry
The sample document has the word "was" word split with "w" one one line and "as" on the next but with no "-" to show it's wrapping.

In the profile:
In the skills section:
Skill "content writing" is duplicated. Maybe remove the one without the check mark.

Thanks... Will work on that ASAP