Brutal Critique Needed

[kelmelo]

Hi all, 

I have edited my profile so many times and in so many different ways but I am yet to get a single click or order. I need help diagnosing what the issue is. 

 

I'd appreciate the help

 

Here is a gig you can use to access my profile. 

https://www.fiverr.com/s2/1fe9a37d03

 

Please be as honest as possible. I am not looking to feel better. I want results. 

 

Thanks

[uk1000]

Your post should really be moved to "Improve my gig" if you want critique on your profile/gigs.

Here's some comments though:

The main gig images are the wrong aspect ratio really for display on the profile (some gets cut off) - you could try making them more like 1.619:1 aspect ratio. Also the text on them isn't really optimized for display on the profile/search results pages (in terms of easily seeing at a glance what the gig is about).

Gig: I will write effective website copy and content for you
It says you create 1 page but maybe it could give a rough idea of how many words that will be.
You could try adding more search tags.

Gig: I will write engaging long form blog content for you
It says "for your business, academic or personal needs." - be careful of the rules on academic content.

The faq says "Do you write product reviews? Yes, I do write product reviews." - If they're the sort of reviews that would get shown somewhere, those aren't allowed by Fiverr. Check the Community Rules page at https://www.fiverr.com/community/standards/prohibited-services

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Do not post, offer, or ask for:

Paid reviews

Positive or negative feedback on any product, service, or performance.

 

 

[khalifacyrusuk]

 

13 minutes ago, uk1000 said:

Your post should really be moved to "Improve my gig" if you want critique on your profile/gigs.

Here's some comments though:

The main gig images are the wrong aspect ratio really for display on the profile (some gets cut off) - you could try making them more like 1.619:1 aspect ratio. Also the text on them isn't really optimized for display on the profile/search results pages (in terms of easily seeing at a glance what the gig is about).

Gig: I will write effective website copy and content for you
It says you create 1 page but maybe it could give a rough idea of how many words that will be.
You could try adding more search tags.

Gig: I will write engaging long form blog content for you
It says "for your business, academic or personal needs." - be careful of the rules on academic content.

The faq says "Do you write product reviews? Yes, I do write product reviews." - If they're the sort of reviews that would get shown somewhere, those aren't allowed by Fiverr. Check the Community Rules page at https://www.fiverr.com/community/standards/prohibited-services

 

This reply is very good. Only thing to add is: quantify things. You make claims like 'i will boost sales' - what does that ACTUALLY MEAN. Do you boost sales by 1%? 10%? 1000%? Give examples - you have the space to do so. 

[kelmelo]

2 hours ago, uk1000 said:

Your post should really be moved to "Improve my gig" if you want critique on your profile/gigs.

Here's some comments though:

The main gig images are the wrong aspect ratio really for display on the profile (some gets cut off) - you could try making them more like 1.619:1 aspect ratio. Also the text on them isn't really optimized for display on the profile/search results pages (in terms of easily seeing at a glance what the gig is about).

Gig: I will write effective website copy and content for you
It says you create 1 page but maybe it could give a rough idea of how many words that will be.
You could try adding more search tags.

Gig: I will write engaging long form blog content for you
It says "for your business, academic or personal needs." - be careful of the rules on academic content.

The faq says "Do you write product reviews? Yes, I do write product reviews." - If they're the sort of reviews that would get shown somewhere, those aren't allowed by Fiverr. Check the Community Rules page at https://www.fiverr.com/community/standards/prohibited-services

 

Thank you so much for taking the time. I really appreciate the feedback. 

[kelmelo]

3 hours ago, uk1000 said:

Your post should really be moved to "Improve my gig" if you want critique on your profile/gigs.

Here's some comments though:

The main gig images are the wrong aspect ratio really for display on the profile (some gets cut off) - you could try making them more like 1.619:1 aspect ratio. Also the text on them isn't really optimized for display on the profile/search results pages (in terms of easily seeing at a glance what the gig is about).

Gig: I will write effective website copy and content for you
It says you create 1 page but maybe it could give a rough idea of how many words that will be.
You could try adding more search tags.

Gig: I will write engaging long form blog content for you
It says "for your business, academic or personal needs." - be careful of the rules on academic content.

The faq says "Do you write product reviews? Yes, I do write product reviews." - If they're the sort of reviews that would get shown somewhere, those aren't allowed by Fiverr. Check the Community Rules page at https://www.fiverr.com/community/standards/prohibited-services

 

@reviews thanks for bringing my attention. It. I really meant product descriptions. This has been a helpful critique thank you 

[kelmelo]

2 hours ago, khalifacyrusuk said:

 

This reply is very good. Only thing to add is: quantify things. You make claims like 'i will boost sales' - what does that ACTUALLY MEAN. Do you boost sales by 1%? 10%? 1000%? Give examples - you have the space to do so. 

Alright. Thank you for the feedback. I will gladly implement these. Have a good one.