Kindly check my gig and comment

[farukhkhawaja]

Its my Medical logo based gig I have tried my best for Keyword and Gig images but although I dint get any order yet.

https://www.fiverr.com/share/qxgXz9

Thanks.

 

[uchihashahin01]

Patience is the key of success...Promote your gig in the socials so that it can get you more rich...

 

Hope you will get orders..

[rabiul2222]

The main problems of your gigs are otherwise it'll be good:

1. You've attached only logos and there isn't a image which will describe your offer

2. You've provided a lot of revisions and if buyer says give revise every time then you have nothing to do

3. You said Hello Buyers, The first sentence is very critical and you've said Hello Buyers! You should start asking by a question.

4. You should use your keyword 2 times per 400 words and never use a word over 5% keyword density

5. Spelling mistake and unformality: You shouldn't use 24 hrs you should use 24 hours. The spelling mistake is guarantee. 

6. You haven't said clients the requirement which you need to get started in the description

7. There is no call to action😨😨. (e.g And don't forget I provide 100% Money Back Guarantee with my gig. Click Buy Now to get started! I've darkened the spelling mistake. 

 

I hope it'll be helpful 😉😉

 

[farukhkhawaja]

Thanks Its really helpful I need to ask one thing is

how to check keyword density?

[ligiacarvalho]

• Quote

  100% MONEY BACK GRANTEE

  Do not offer this ☝️as it is the easiest way to attract scammers. Not to mention, abusing the cancellation option is against Fiverr TOS and can put your account at risk.

[maezma85]

4 minutes ago, ligiacarvalho said:

• Do not offer this ☝️as it is the easiest way to attract scammers. Not to mention, abusing the cancellation option is against Fiverr TOS and can put your account at risk.

Totally agree with what @ligiacarvalho mentions. You should not put that text and you should not offer unlimited revisions because it will give you a lot of headaches.

[freelancer_noor]

14 hours ago, farukhkhawaja said:

Thanks Its really helpful I need to ask one thing is

how to check keyword density?

search google "keyword density checker"