Help me criticize my gigs

[revix7205]

Hi fellow freelancers!
I’ve been on this platform for a long time, but I am unable to get my hands on any projects. I would be grateful if you could take a look at my gigs and help me get better at this.
Thanks!

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[freelance_amir]

welcome to the forum

[uk1000]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will edit your family travel and wedding video
In all 3 package descriptions “i will” could be “I will”

Gig: I will professionally edit your social media videos in 24 hours
In all 3 package descriptions “i will” could be “I will”
Where it says “stitch every frame of your videos with the best way possible” - I’m not sure if that would be better saying “…in the best way possible.”.

In the search tags: "proffesional could be “professional”

Maybe add an faq section to the gig(s) if it will help the buyer have the info they need.

In the profile maybe add more skills. Maybe make “Videoeditor” 2 words.

[revix7205]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will edit your family travel and wedding video

In all 3 package descriptions “i will” could be “I will”

Gig: I will professionally edit your social media videos in 24 hours

In all 3 package descriptions “i will” could be “I will”

Where it says “stitch every frame of your videos with the best way possible” - I’m not sure if that would be better saying “…in the best way possible.”.

In the search tags: "proffesional could be “professional”

Maybe add an faq section to the gig(s) if it will help the buyer have the info they need.

In the profile maybe add more skills. Maybe make “Videoeditor” 2 words.

Thankyou for your valuable insights!