Need your suggestion to improve my gig and profile to get my first order~

[adityaadam]

Need suggestion to improve my gig. Here is my gig: https://www.fiverr.com/share/oQXprL

[janeeditor]

Trying to circumvent Fiverr’s no external URL policy in your profile description text will likely get your account suspended, so I would strongly recommend removing that.

Your grammar has some errors, which I’d suggest correcting. Also, the fact that state that your work is “Most of my work inspired by movie/cartoon that I had seen before.” means that it’s likely not original. Ask yourself why would someone want to pay for your work when it’s the same as something else?

Also, your gig is very brief. Explain why you solve a problem for buyers. It’s not just the “what”, it’s the “why” that matters when selling.

[benedictrm]

Hi Aditya

I like your style but Jane is right on all points.

Get rid of external contacts before you get banned. That is at least two bot warnings right there in your Profile. if there is a third elsewhere you can be gone before you even get the first warning email.

Understand that this is not just about whether you agree with TOS or not (despite your saying you do) but that this sends a poor message, that you are a rule breaker, a bender of promises. That is not the image you really want to give to people looking to trust you for their drawings. Also the few who follow those links will be dangerous to your health as they are probably less morally squared-away than you 😉

You could say a lot here to build yourself and your style,

🙂

[joshua_babs]

^What they said

I will advise you read Fiverr’s Terms of Service.

[adityaadam]

Trying to circumvent Fiverr’s no external URL policy in your profile description text will likely get your account suspended, so I would strongly recommend removing that.

Your grammar has some errors, which I’d suggest correcting. Also, the fact that state that your work is “Most of my work inspired by movie/cartoon that I had seen before.” means that it’s likely not original. Ask yourself why would someone want to pay for your work when it’s the same as something else?

Also, your gig is very brief. Explain why you solve a problem for buyers. It’s not just the “what”, it’s the “why” that matters when selling.

Hi Jane, thank you so much! It means a lot to me! 🙂

[adityaadam]

Hi Aditya

I like your style but Jane is right on all points.

Get rid of external contacts before you get banned. That is at least two bot warnings right there in your Profile. if there is a third elsewhere you can be gone before you even get the first warning email.

Understand that this is not just about whether you agree with TOS or not (despite your saying you do) but that this sends a poor message, that you are a rule breaker, a bender of promises. That is not the image you really want to give to people looking to trust you for their drawings. Also the few who follow those links will be dangerous to your health as they are probably less morally squared-away than you 😉

You could say a lot here to build yourself and your style,

🙂

[adityaadam]

^What they said

I will advise you read Fiverr’s Terms of Service.

I will! Thanks Joshua!