Any chance of improvement

[magarea]

Hello friends could you pls take a look at gig and let me know if it looks like impressive ?

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Magarea: I will share forex strategy which I am using in my real account for...

For only $50, Magarea will share forex strategy which I am using in my real account. | This online lesson would be perfect for those who are struggling in forex trading and haven't found strategy which can provide stable return.I will tech | Fiverr

[imagination7413]

Why’d you change the gig title to that?

Your gig image doesn’t make much sense either.

[magarea]

Why’d you change the gig title to that?

Your gig image doesn’t make much sense either.

thanks for your reply. yes image not looking good so soon will upload video. couldn’t understand you mentioned about title?

[imagination7413]

Original title was better. Not great, but better.

fiverr.com/magarea/help-you-in-forex-trading-be-it-fundamental-or-technical-knowledge

share forex strategy which I am using in my real account

The second title makes you sound desperate, not professional. (Plus it’s not SEO.)

[enunciator]

Oh wow. Nothing conveys an authentic account and gig better than actually stating it is a “real account” right in the gig title.

[magarea]

Original title was better. Not great, but better.

fiverr.com/magarea/help-you-in-forex-trading-be-it-fundamental-or-technical-knowledge

share forex strategy which I am using in my real account

The second title makes you sound desperate, not professional. (Plus it’s not SEO.)

thanks for feedback did some changes and uploaded video too

https://www.fiverr.com/share/KkVqpl :thinking: