I would like to get some suggestions on my gigs

[miguelcc]

Hello, I’m new on the forum and I’ve been for about a month selling services on fiverr, I would like to get some suggestions for more orders on any of my gigs:

https://www.fiverr.com/share/Pw5Zjg
https://www.fiverr.com/share/ApWZQX

Thank you beforehand

[saakibkhan]

Please tell me…

[uk1000]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will create your professional discord bot in java
In the gig description:
Maybe reword “a discord servers” (“a” specifies it’s singular but “servers” is plural).

Gig: I will make or edit your native android app in java or kotlin
In the gig description:
“the deliver will contain” could be “the delivery will contain”

Maybe add images/a gig video showing example apps that you created (example ones, not those for clients if you don’t have permission for it).

[miguelcc]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will create your professional discord bot in java

In the gig description:

Maybe reword “a discord servers” (“a” specifies it’s singular but “servers” is plural).

Gig: I will make or edit your native android app in java or kotlin

In the gig description:

“the deliver will contain” could be “the delivery will contain”

Maybe add images/a gig video showing example apps that you created (example ones, not those for clients if you don’t have permission for it).

Amazing, I will use your suggestions, thanks.

[career_enhancer]

Hello, I’m new on the forum and I’ve been for about a month selling services on fiverr, I would like to get some suggestions for more orders on any of my gigs:

https://www.fiverr.com/share/Pw5Zjg

https://www.fiverr.com/share/ApWZQX

Thank you beforehand

I’m new on the forum

welcome to fiverr forum