Hello, i would love to know your thought on my gigs and what needs to be improved. Having a 3rd person's perspective will help a lot

[Guest felixkun12]

[uk1000]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will write an anime review in 72 hours
In the gig description:
“So i wanted to write” could be "So I wanted to write "

I’d be careful of this review gig since paid reviews are (eg. like those with a star rating shown online) against Fiverr’s TOS.

See this page too:
https://www.fiverr.com/community/standards/integrity-authenticity

Paid reviews

Do not post, offer or ask for paid reviews, positive or negative feedback on any product, service or performance.

In the profile:
The avg. response time is quite high at 12 hours. It’s possible that might affect messages/orders.

In some gigs you say “No, Every content I have ever written…”. I’d make the “every” in lower case. Also maybe it could be “No, all content I have ever written…”.

[Guest felixkun12]

These are my suggestions/comments:

Gig: I will write an anime review in 72 hours

In the gig description:

“So i wanted to write” could be "So I wanted to write "

I’d be careful of this review gig since paid reviews are (eg. like those with a star rating shown online) against Fiverr’s TOS.

See this page too:

Paid reviews

Do not post, offer or ask for paid reviews, positive or negative feedback on any product, service or performance.

In the profile:

The avg. response time is quite high at 12 hours. It’s possible that might affect messages/orders.

In some gigs you say “No, Every content I have ever written…”. I’d make the “every” in lower case. Also maybe it could be “No, all content I have ever written…”.

Thank you, you were so much helpful.