How can I make my profile better?

[abdali18]

Hi Everyone!
Please visit my profile and point out how can I make it better?

[imagination7413]

Your level of English is closer to ‘basic’ or ‘conversational’, not ‘fluent’. (PRF) point 2, (CPM) point 6:

Introduction– This is not a list on how to make gigs. This is for gigs that are already made that are under-performing, need an overhaul, or just need somewhere to start for self-evaluation/education. It does contain a few general-information bits, and can help during gig creation, but that is neither the focus nor the intent. For more information on any of the following sections or points, please see ‘Other Resources’ under (RRD) at the end of this post. Sections: (TCT) Title, Category, and…

Also, (DES) point 1 and (IMG) point 2.