Can you make my gig the best it can be?

[ezekry]

I have been doing changes to my gig and was wondering what you all felt about my gigs.
Please tell me if what you feel about my gig even if you have no criticism.
Also, should I change my video, I have been considering it for a bit, but I would like a second opinion.
Here is my gig:
https://www.fiverr.com/ezekry/create-a-corporate-video
Also, tell me if I should change something about my profile.
https://www.fiverr.com/ezekry?public_mode=true

[ezekry]

Anybody have anything to say?