Suggest for improve my gigs:

[saadishtiaq1611]

Hi, Respected member,

I need suggestions and tips from all of you, how I can improve and make an attractive Gig?
The last six months 362 offers sent from my side but still not get any task. I need help if possible kindly check my gigs where improvement needed. Thanks for your attention.

[Guest humanissocial]

Read this.

This is probably why you’re not getting acceptances to your BR responses.

Also, your English is poor and buyers want proper English.

[saadishtiaq1611]

Read this. READ, People! Be original!

This is probably why you’re not getting acceptances to your BR responses.

Also, your English is poor and buyers want proper English.

Hi, Thanks for reply.

My English score is 8.5 how is it poor?

As per your mentioned reference I always wrote a specific offer as per buyer request. Never used any template.