I need some suggestions guys!

[sofyandrew]

hello!
this is my first gig on fiverr after a very long time, do you have any suggestions? LINK : https://www.fiverr.com/sofyandrew/create-animated-marketing-video-about-a-marketing-strategy-plan
thank you guys!

[Guest lloydsolutions]

Suggest you check out the competition in your category re pricing as new sellers usually lower their prices until they move up the levels.

Enjoy the forum. 🙂

[sofyandrew]

thank you so much
😀

[imagination7413]

You offer animated video, but have no sample.

Unlimited revisions are never a good idea.

Your gig descriptions need a LOT of work. I’m not even sure what you’re offering in the linked gig, and, your other gig is inconsistent: You offer to take the pictures in the first and third packages, but Photoshop in the second. Which is it? They look like stock photos as well, as none of them also show a recipe.

There are a LOT English errors in this gig, your other gig, and your profile. You list English as ‘unspecified’ and it would be better to list it as ‘basic.’ Consider adding your native language to your profile as ‘Native/Bilingual.’

[sofyandrew]

You offer animated video, but have no sample.

Unlimited revisions are never a good idea.

Your gig descriptions need a LOT of work. I’m not even sure what you’re offering in the linked gig, and, your other gig is inconsistent: You offer to take the pictures in the first and third packages, but Photoshop in the second. Which is it? They look like stock photos as well, as none of them also show a recipe.

There are a LOT English errors in this gig, your other gig, and your profile. You list English as ‘unspecified’ and it would be better to list it as ‘basic.’ Consider adding your native language to your profile as ‘Native/Bilingual.’

thank you so much for your honestly, i will work on the little details that will hopefully make the difference 😘