murmuo Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Hello, everyone, I need help translating.I’m from Russia and I’m starting to learn English and design banners. Now I want to try to enter the European design market.I have attached banners, can you tell me how to write sentences on banners correctly?What banners did I attach and what do they contain?Banner for a pizzeria. The banner says about the promotion, 25% discount on pizza Margarita.Banner for a cosmetics store for international women’s day. , up to 50% discount all week.Please write your feedback, suggestions, and comments on these works, tell me how to write these offers correctly! ImgBB pizzaImage pizza hosted in ImgBB ImgBB wmndayImage wmnday hosted in ImgBB 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imagination7413 Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Most is fine, though I would go ‘delicious discount’ rather than ‘delicious promotion,’ but the last three lines are wordy.Today only25% off MargaritaorToday only25% off yourMargarita pizzaAlso, you might want to make the word ‘the’ the same font, in ‘pizza of the day.’As for the second, bit more work needed.Celebrate March 8International Women’s dayDiscounts of up to 50% off!Promo code: WMNDAYGive yourself a giftCode valid March 6th to 12thAny questions? 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murmuo Posted February 28, 2020 Author Share Posted February 28, 2020 Most is fine, though I would go ‘delicious discount’ rather than ‘delicious promotion,’ but the last three lines are wordy.Today only25% off MargaritaorToday only25% off yourMargarita pizzaAlso, you might want to make the word ‘the’ the same font, in ‘pizza of the day.’As for the second, bit more work needed.Celebrate March 8International Women’s dayDiscounts of up to 50% off!Promo code: WMNDAYGive yourself a giftCode valid March 6th to 12thAny questions?Yes, can you check it? ImgBB march8Image march8 hosted in ImgBB ImgBB PizzaImage Pizza hosted in ImgBB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murmuo Posted February 28, 2020 Author Share Posted February 28, 2020 Most is fine, though I would go ‘delicious discount’ rather than ‘delicious promotion,’ but the last three lines are wordy.Today only25% off MargaritaorToday only25% off yourMargarita pizzaAlso, you might want to make the word ‘the’ the same font, in ‘pizza of the day.’As for the second, bit more work needed.Celebrate March 8International Women’s dayDiscounts of up to 50% off!Promo code: WMNDAYGive yourself a giftCode valid March 6th to 12thAny questions?Thank you for help!Can I help you with something in return? Perhaps you need a banner or business card design? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imagination7413 Posted February 28, 2020 Share Posted February 28, 2020 Reads good.Visuals, I would recommend making the word ‘celebrate’ so that the right edge of the letter ‘c’ lines up with the right edge of the letter ‘m’ below it, whether by spacing out the letters a bit, or making the word larger, or a combination of the two. Secondly, shrinking the ‘8’ a bit, so that it lines up with the bottom or the second line of textSecond image, same thing. All the text needs to be scaled up a bit, so that it can be readable in that smaller cell-phone example. I think I also like the other font better, though it’s notably better with the font all the same style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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