Give me any valuable advice about my gig!

[dmitrokyiashko]

Hello, Fiverr community!

I`d like to ask for your advice about one of my gigs.

Here is the link: https://www.fiverr.com/share/wk11dq

What do I need to add to it?

Maybe I should remove something?

Maybe I need to work on my vocabulary and word usage?

Please, give me any advice!

Tnx!

Dmitro.