Any suggestions to improve?

[ummeaiman739]

Hey everyone please give suggestions to improve my gig.
https://www.fiverr.com/ummeaiman739/design-a-logo-and-business-card

[Guest lloydsolutions]

You joined Fiverr in September 2019 and have 29 reviews on this gig.

Some sellers wait months to get their first order.

If it ain’t broke don’t fix it! 🙂

[uk1000]

In the gig video around 9-10 seconds in you say “your buisness” instead of “your business”.

In your gig description you write “Here” with upper case H after a comma. Maybe it should be lower case.

[ummeaiman739]

You joined Fiverr in September 2019 and have 29 reviews on this gig.

Some sellers wait months to get their first order.

If it ain’t broke don’t fix it! 🙂

Yes you are right but suddenly my impressions are just draining and i’m not receiving order any more. Impressions just dropped from 7k to 2k.

[ummeaiman739]

In the gig video around 9-10 seconds in you say “your buisness” instead of “your business”.

In your gig description you write “Here” with upper case H after a comma. Maybe it should be lower case.

Nice observation. I’ll correct it

Thanks