Check if there are mistakes

[mawais10]

Hello guys this is my fiverr gig link:
https://www.fiverr.com/share/BRX6d7
check if i made some mistakes and tell me to fix them and also tell me a good way to promote my gigs

[happyspace]

Hi

Since you are asking:

1. your service is too similar to hundreds other gigs. This can make it difficult for one to stand out.

2. your gig description seems a bit too pushy and demanding. By the way, no need to use so many capital letters.

3. You may be forgetting the use the word “please”. Both in your gig-description and in your post here.

regards