Have I got my Fiverr video right

[weareartfull]

I just added my Fiverr video to my gig. Does it look good? Appreciate any thoughts on this.

https://www.fiverr.com/share/vvvE6A

[uk1000]

It’s good. It might help if it was a bit faster or showed some of your skills/work in graphics design.

The video says “…years of experiance” instead of “…years of experience”.
The way it shows “Flyer” makes it look like there’s a space after the “y”.
It says “unlimited reservations”. It’s not clear if you mean “unlimited revisions” there.

[weareartfull]

It’s good. It might help if it was a bit faster or showed some of your skills/work in graphics design.

The video says “…years of experiance” instead of “…years of experience”.

The way it shows “Flyer” makes it look like there’s a space after the “y”.

It says “unlimited reservations”. It’s not clear if you mean “unlimited revisions” there.

Point taken. Thank a lot