sarabogdanovic Posted October 12, 2019 Share Posted October 12, 2019 https://www.fiverr.com/share/1rdq9Here are links to my gigs. I would really appreciate if someone could review them and give me some feedback🙂 . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asifjalil Posted October 12, 2019 Share Posted October 12, 2019 Your gig title is to longsearch a best keywordsselect relative category and sub categoryYou did not provide proper description about work almost all of your description is about youhopefully it will give you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbeastseo Posted October 12, 2019 Share Posted October 12, 2019 I am agree with @asifjalil , also try to add a good looking gig image.Your gig description is not clear , write a clear gig description. stay online as many as possible.ThanksM Alam 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uk1000 Posted October 13, 2019 Share Posted October 13, 2019 TitleThe title “I will diligent data entry work with all type of data at low price”I’m not sure if it should say “…with all types of data” instead.If you keep “at low price” (or change it to “at a low price”) that might restrict how you can adjust the price later.The “I will diligent data entry work…” bit could be changed to “I will diligently do data entry work…”Though even if the gig title was changed the URL will stay the same.Gig DescriptionIt says “Greetings to all byuers regarding this gig!”. “byuers” should be “buyers”.It says “Here you can easily allow yourself to someone else do your easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.”That could be reworded. eg. “Here you can easily allow someone else to do the easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.” but I think changing the whole sentence might be better. I’m also not sure it should say it’s “boring” in case it sounds like it could be boring for you to do, not just for the buyer to do.It says “therefore you can count on analytical mindest, detail orientation, self-motivation, proactivity, excellent time management.”. “mindest” should be “mindset”. I’m not sure if there should be an “an” after “you can count on”.It says “…please do not hesitate to contact me through any of the listed mediums.”. It might be simpler to say “…please do not hesitate to contact me”, since they should see a “Contact Seller” button on the same page. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabogdanovic Posted October 13, 2019 Author Share Posted October 13, 2019 TitleThe title “I will diligent data entry work with all type of data at low price”I’m not sure if it should say “…with all types of data” instead.If you keep “at low price” (or change it to “at a low price”) that might restrict how you can adjust the price later.The “I will diligent data entry work…” bit could be changed to “I will diligently do data entry work…”Though even if the gig title was changed the URL will stay the same.Gig DescriptionIt says “Greetings to all byuers regarding this gig!”. “byuers” should be “buyers”.It says “Here you can easily allow yourself to someone else do your easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.”That could be reworded. eg. “Here you can easily allow someone else to do the easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.” but I think changing the whole sentence might be better. I’m also not sure it should say it’s “boring” in case it sounds like it could be boring for you to do, not just for the buyer to do.It says “therefore you can count on analytical mindest, detail orientation, self-motivation, proactivity, excellent time management.”. “mindest” should be “mindset”. I’m not sure if there should be an “an” after “you can count on”.It says “…please do not hesitate to contact me through any of the listed mediums.”. It might be simpler to say “…please do not hesitate to contact me”, since they should see a “Contact Seller” button on the same page.Thank you for extensive feedback, I wasn’t paying enough attention to my description.I will change thid for sure 🙂 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
humanissocial Posted October 13, 2019 Share Posted October 13, 2019 Proofread. Your English is poor throughout.If you are going to say you are detail-oriented, you need to be detail oriented in your own gig and work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabogdanovic Posted October 13, 2019 Author Share Posted October 13, 2019 Your gig title is to longsearch a best keywordsselect relative category and sub categoryYou did not provide proper description about work almost all of your description is about youhopefully it will give youI thought it was a good category and subcategory?As for everything else, I’ll change the description, it is definitely bad. 😃 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabogdanovic Posted October 13, 2019 Author Share Posted October 13, 2019 Proofread. Your English is poor throughout.If you are going to say you are detail-oriented, you need to be detail oriented in your own gig and work.I must agree with you. I wasn’t paying a lot of attention throughout writing. 😦 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabogdanovic Posted October 13, 2019 Author Share Posted October 13, 2019 TitleThe title “I will diligent data entry work with all type of data at low price”I’m not sure if it should say “…with all types of data” instead.If you keep “at low price” (or change it to “at a low price”) that might restrict how you can adjust the price later.The “I will diligent data entry work…” bit could be changed to “I will diligently do data entry work…”Though even if the gig title was changed the URL will stay the same.Gig DescriptionIt says “Greetings to all byuers regarding this gig!”. “byuers” should be “buyers”.It says “Here you can easily allow yourself to someone else do your easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.”That could be reworded. eg. “Here you can easily allow someone else to do the easiest and probably the most boring part of any work.” but I think changing the whole sentence might be better. I’m also not sure it should say it’s “boring” in case it sounds like it could be boring for you to do, not just for the buyer to do.It says “therefore you can count on analytical mindest, detail orientation, self-motivation, proactivity, excellent time management.”. “mindest” should be “mindset”. I’m not sure if there should be an “an” after “you can count on”.It says “…please do not hesitate to contact me through any of the listed mediums.”. It might be simpler to say “…please do not hesitate to contact me”, since they should see a “Contact Seller” button on the same page.ere you can easily allow someone else to do the easiest and probably the most boring part of any worksorry, it was a mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarabogdanovic Posted October 13, 2019 Author Share Posted October 13, 2019 I am agree with @asifjalil , also try to add a good looking gig image.Your gig description is not clear , write a clear gig description. stay online as many as possible.ThanksM Alamwhat’s wrong with the picture? 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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