sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 https://www.fiverr.com/share/YNAjpThis is the link for my first ever gig on fivverI need buyers 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ammarshrf Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 This is your gig’s description:"hello everyonei love creative writing and i love to create magic with my wordsisn’t it fun to change other peoples mindset in a positive way through your writingi can do thati will try my best to help you "No commas, no dots, no nothing and the whole description is written in small letters, even “I” is written as “i”. Work on your writing if you want to sell a writing gig. I honestly wouldn’t purchase from you after seeing your gig/profile.Good luck. 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maitasun Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 @ammarshrf, sadly, everybody has suddenly become a writer and/or proofreader. They think writing is just putting words together and that proofreading is passing a text through a software… 🤨 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Author Share Posted August 3, 2019 My dear writing is my passionIts just not a way of making moneyI know how to pour emotions and sense in my writings@maitasunAnd thanks @ammarshrf for correcting meBasically this is my first time working online.I think everyone make a mistake but i will try my best to improve and to avoid silly mistakes.I am really passionate about my writing skills 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maitasun Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 My dear writing is my passionIts just not a way of making moneyI know how to pour emotions and sense in my writings@maitasunAnd thanks @ammarshrf for correcting meBasically this is my first time working online.I think everyone make a mistake but i will try my best to improve and to avoid silly mistakes.I am really passionate about my writing skillsMy dear writing is my passionIts just not a way of making moneyI know to pour emotions and sense in my writings@sanasaghir13, not to discourage you, but you have at least 6 mistakes on the text I quoted, not to mention the rest of what you wrote. And I’m not an English proofreader or writer.If your mistakes are so obvious to me, imagine how they will be seen by a native English speaker writer/proofreader, or even worse, a native English speaker buyer. Think about it. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Author Share Posted August 3, 2019 My dear writing is my passionIts just not a way of making moneyI know to pour emotions and sense in my writings@sanasaghir13, not to discourage you, but you have at least 6 mistakes on the text I quoted, not to mention the rest of what you wrote. And I’m not an English proofreader or writer.If your mistakes are so obvious to me, imagine how they will be seen by a native English speaker writer/proofreader, or even worse, a native English speaker buyer. Think about it.Thankyou so much.I will try my best to avoid such mistakes. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hasantashlim Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 My dear writing is my passionIts just not a way of making moneyI know how to pour emotions and sense in my writings@maitasunAnd thanks @ammarshrf for correcting meBasically this is my first time working online.I think everyone make a mistake but i will try my best to improve and to avoid silly mistakes.I am really passionate about my writing skillsOnly passion is not going to help dear. You should work harder to improve your writing skills. Be careful about the mistakes you are doing in every piece of writing. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Author Share Posted August 3, 2019 Only passion is not going to help dear. You should work harder to improve your writing skills. Be careful about the mistakes you are doing in every piece of writing.SureI will try my best.I hope i would get positive response in future. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hasantashlim Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 SureI will try my best.I hope i would get positive response in future.Don’t be frustrated. Every criticism will lead you to the right direction. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Author Share Posted August 3, 2019 Don’t be frustrated. Every criticism will lead you to the right direction.No noI dont feel bad. I will try to learn from my mistakes. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahmwritingco Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 @ammarshrf, sadly, everybody has suddenly become a writer and/or proofreader. They think writing is just putting words together and that proofreading is passing a text through a software… 🤨They think writing is just putting words together and that proofreading is passing a text through a software… 🤨Yes… probably because of those books that promise good money just for clicking a button. 🤨not to discourage you, but you have at least 6 mistakes on the text I quotedI’m gonna test you on those later. 🤭How to get buyers easily on fivverYou’re charging $10 per 100 words. You charge more for your work than some TSRs, despite having less experience and less skill.If you want regular orders, you’ll have to lower your prices significantly or improve your skillset significantly.Punctuation seems to be one of your weaknesses. To learn more about the English punctuation system, read The Penguin Guide to Punctuation by R.L. Trask. It’s a very approachable book, which covers all of the basics. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamsachmusic Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 This is your gig’s description:"hello everyonei love creative writing and i love to create magic with my wordsisn’t it fun to change other peoples mindset in a positive way through your writingi can do thati will try my best to help you "No commas, no dots, no nothing and the whole description is written in small letters, even “I” is written as “i”. Work on your writing if you want to sell a writing gig. I honestly wouldn’t purchase from you after seeing your gig/profile.Good luck.No commas, no dots, no nothing and the whole description is written in small letters, even “I” is written as “i”.Maybe she used Google Assistant or Siri for speech to text? 🧐 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maitasun Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 They think writing is just putting words together and that proofreading is passing a text through a software… 🤨Yes… probably because of those books that promise good money just for clicking a button. 🤨not to discourage you, but you have at least 6 mistakes on the text I quotedI’m gonna test you on those later. 🤭How to get buyers easily on fivverYou’re charging $10 per 100 words. You charge more for your work than some TSRs, despite having less experience and less skill.If you want regular orders, you’ll have to lower your prices significantly or improve your skillset significantly.Punctuation seems to be one of your weaknesses. To learn more about the English punctuation system, read The Penguin Guide to Punctuation by R.L. Trask. It’s a very approachable book, which covers all of the basics.Yes… probably because of those books that promise good money just for clicking a button. 🤨Promises are like mist, so far and so close at the same time… 🤨 I’m gonna test you on those later. 🤭😲To learn more about the English punctuation system, read The Penguin Guide to Punctuation by R.L. Trask.I’m taking this advice for myself! Spanish is sooooo different from English. 🙃 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanasaghir13 Posted August 3, 2019 Author Share Posted August 3, 2019 No commas, no dots, no nothing and the whole description is written in small letters, even “I” is written as “i”.Maybe she used Google Assistant or Siri for speech to text? 🧐Oh woww how can you say this?I didn’t used anything elsePlease be kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamsachmusic Posted August 3, 2019 Share Posted August 3, 2019 Oh woww how can you say this?I didn’t used anything elsePlease be kind.It is not an offensive thing to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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