About Gig Description

[albizs]

Hi, I’ve post few days ago about my gig and asked you’r opininons about it. I’ve changed many things and ask you again How is my gig (Especially description) Thank you a lot. (and yes i’ve read important topic in the forum)
https://www.fiverr.com/albizs/design-powerful-competitive-logo-for-you

[ahmwritingco]

A couple of changes need to be made, especially to your opening paragraph:

• The noun “logo” is countable, so needs the article “a” before it

• Also, make sure to leave spaces after periods (.)

If you make the above changes, your opening paragraph will read:

A logo is the best way to summarize your mission and dream. I’ll design a logo for you in a flat, minimalistic and powerful way.

It’s not perfect, but it’s better!

[ahmwritingco]

A couple of changes need to be made, especially to your opening paragraph:

• The noun “logo” is countable, so needs the article “a” before it

• Also, make sure to leave spaces after periods (.)

If you make the above changes, your opening paragraph will read:

A logo is the best way to summarize your mission and dream. I’ll design a logo for you in a flat, minimalistic and powerful way.

It’s not perfect, but it’s better!

• Also, make sure to leave spaces after periods (.)

This rule of punctuation generally applies to commas, too.

Your Gig title should read:

I Will Design a Powerful, Competitive Logo For You

Rather than…

I Will Design Powerful,Competitive Logo For You

Because the noun “logo” is considered countable, we also have to add the word “a” at the start of the phrase in which it’s a part of.

[albizs]

• Also, make sure to leave spaces after periods (.)

This rule of punctuation generally applies to commas, too.

Your Gig title should read:

I Will Design a Powerful, Competitive Logo For You

Rather than…

I Will Design Powerful,Competitive Logo For You

Because the noun “logo” is considered countable, we also have to add the word “a” at the start of the phrase in which it’s a part of.

I forget about to title, thanks again