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eastahadshafinh

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eastahadshafinh Newbie

eastahadshafinh

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I am an old user but post a Gig Some Days Ago, Now If I have any problem with my Gig! Please Give me suggestions. I am totally a new giger so Please tell me How can I improve my Gig. Now my gig is waiting on the 3rd, sometimes 4th and Today I saw it on the 5th page by one of my Gig tags.
Waiting to a response from the Experts

My Gig’s Link - https://www.fiverr.com/share/ZWwLp
This Gig details-
Impression: 434
Views:360
Click: 144
Order: 0
Cancellation: 0
Is it okay?? Then How much time need to get my first order!!!

Thanks
Shafin

Guest junaiidgraphics

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yeah its looking perfect

jamesroscoe Apprentice

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Looks like you’re getting good impressions and click-throughs, so the problem must be on-page conversions, i.e. people are viewing your gig but deciding not to order.

I don’t think being told it’s ‘perfect’ is what you need to hear if you aren’t getting orders - You want some constructive feedback to help you improve it, right?

So, my initial first impression was that I didn’t really ‘get’ your video. I’m not quite sure what the message is? Why is there a woman pulling odd facial expressions? Ok, there’s some message tucked away there about smiling / being happy, but it just feels a bit strange! ‘Buy big, smile big’…? It’s a bit cheesy and doesn’t quite make sense to me, sorry!

You don’t seem to show any examples of logos in your video, but the images of logos you have produced on the subsequent slides look great - so show them off!

Ultimately what do people want to see from you? Evidence of your expertise in producing great logos. I’d strongly think about reworking your gig video to focus on that. Lose the clutter and the cheesiness, and focus on what you do well. Hope that helps. 🙂

flatpp Newbie

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I agree with @jamesroscoe.

The video is slightly weird and to be honest, quite off putting. The spelling and grammar also seem to be a little ‘off’ too.

I also noticed this in your bio:

" Just Place An Order, I will response you in 2 minutes "

I personally think you should change this. I don’t think it’s possible that anyone can do this 100% of the time and you’re overdelivering slightly.

eastahadshafinh Newbie

eastahadshafinh

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Looks like you’re getting good impressions and click-throughs, so the problem must be on-page conversions, i.e. people are viewing your gig but deciding not to order.

I don’t think being told it’s ‘perfect’ is what you need to hear if you aren’t getting orders - You want some constructive feedback to help you improve it, right?

So, my initial first impression was that I didn’t really ‘get’ your video. I’m not quite sure what the message is? Why is there a woman pulling odd facial expressions? Ok, there’s some message tucked away there about smiling / being happy, but it just feels a bit strange! ‘Buy big, smile big’…? It’s a bit cheesy and doesn’t quite make sense to me, sorry!

You don’t seem to show any examples of logos in your video, but the images of logos you have produced on the subsequent slides look great - so show them off!

Ultimately what do people want to see from you? Evidence of your expertise in producing great logos. I’d strongly think about reworking your gig video to focus on that. Lose the clutter and the cheesiness, and focus on what you do well. Hope that helps. 🙂

@jamesroscoe

"I don’t think being told it’s ‘perfect’ is what you need to hear if you aren’t getting orders"

This is the most expensive sentence from you. I like it. Of course, I need some help, I mean constructive feedback from you. It’s because of why I am here for!

And Thanks for your opinion. I, again and again, read your reply. Here you got my messages from the video. You are right but I was also thinking that it would give me more views and clicks. okay, it gave me those things but don’t bring me orders! I realize that it seems cheesy and ord. So I am removing my video and trying to make a good video with my examples/portfolio. I just keep my slides example for now.

I am so happy to hear from you.

Thanks a lot for your help.

eastahadshafinh Newbie

eastahadshafinh

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I agree with @jamesroscoe.

The video is slightly weird and to be honest, quite off putting. The spelling and grammar also seem to be a little ‘off’ too.

I also noticed this in your bio:

" Just Place An Order, I will response you in 2 minutes "

I personally think you should change this. I don’t think it’s possible that anyone can do this 100% of the time and you’re overdelivering slightly.

Thanks a lot @flatpp for your correction…

I am correcting all things like removing intro Video. I am also changing my Description.

And changing the Bio too. Hope you like those.

Thanks again <3

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