Does my gig need improvement?

[truedimagaming]

I’ve been a seller for over a year now, and not once have I stopped and thought about my description and my gig title. Ever since my gig position dropped I started to constantly edit my gig to try to make it as professional as possible.

https://www.fiverr.com/truedimagaming/make-a-professional-discord-server

Is there anything I can improve on? Is my gig image good? etc

Any help is appreciated!
Thank you
Dima