Do you think my sample video is too over the top?

[dosodraws]

Hello everyone! I’m new here and trying to do my best to get my first order at Fiverr.

I spent the morning carefully writing my profile information and came up with a video showing my artwork…

I’m wondering if it’s adequate or annoying to watch? Do you think it presents my drawing services enticingly?

Please watch and let me know your thoughts:

https://www.fiverr.com/dosodraws/draw-whatever-you-want-in-my-dynamic-bold-style

[fawadkhan21]

@dosodraws ll nice work done, Just giving my opinion that the speed of changing images…… very fast but keep it up

[mariasereti]

Hello and your work is really good. Now about the video, my opinion is to be shorter and the images are going fast. But i really like your art. Good luck
Maria S.

[ronhi85]

If you have some money to spare, you can consider ordering an explainer video. I think it will communicate better.

Good luck!