Please Help me to drive sales

[Guest tiyancreative]

Hey guys, I’d really appreciate some feedback.

I’m a freelance video editor and I’ve recently been trying to drum up more leads for my business. (Don’t worry, I know better than to pitch you here.)

I’ve just set up a gig on Fiverr, and since nothing is really happening I was hoping I could get some feedback from this community.

Here’s the gig:

Any ideas why it’s not converting? Any help is appreciated.