Kindly help me in finding mistakes that I am not aware of?

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Hi Fiver Community.

It’s my second post and the help in my first post is praise worthy. I am sharing my gig. I have just created today. Can someone help me that is it is worth sales converting or not? Your comments would be highly appreciated.

https://www.fiverr.com/web_designs103/design-stunning-website-in-just-24-hours

Thanks