Jump to content

Buyer request is not accepting :(


Recommended Posts

Hello,
Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.
I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello,

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.

I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

Maybe send a link of your portfolio.

I have a tumblr account just for fiverr

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello,

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.

I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

Cover letter must be shorter x2 that yours

Buyers dont like read too much text

But its only my opinion

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello,

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.

I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

give me a good feedback

Asking for good feedback isn’t allowed. You could get an account warning for that, or, if you keep doing it, you could get banned.

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this

This looks like a template you send to everyone (in other words, it looks like you haven’t even read what the buyer needs). It’s better to tell the buyer how you plan to do what they need, and why you think it should be done that way.

  • Like 3
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello,

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.

I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

The offer contains some punctuation and grammar errors.

The thing that irritates me the most is however the tone, the stance, the point of view.

You put openly your personal interest first.

Your job post has caught my attention

It should be the other way around.

I’m considering your job for me

Again, the game is that the buyer is evaluating you, not vice versa.

I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .

You have to prove that, but you can’t do it now.

Not a single line about the request of the buyer, you don’t even ask for more details.

I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

This is not the final straw just because you add something worse shortly after, for three times.

So, ORDER me now,

  1. It’s simply rude.

and Enjoy your Services.

  1. It’s just wrong.

I am really Expect that,

  1. It’s simply rude (and grammatically wrong, as the previous sentences).

Suggestions:

  1. Proofread the text.
  2. Say something about the request. Ask for more information if necessary.
  3. Explain some details of your offer (price, delivery time, possible alternatives). Nothing fancy.
  4. Be corteous.
  • Like 5
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hello,

Your job post has caught my attention Because I am a Graphic Designer and I’m considering your job for me with these required capabilities. I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

So, ORDER me now, and Enjoy your Services.

I am really Expect that, We will meet soon.

Thank you

I am sending it

You reply to the request is way too generic. It also presents an attitude that everything is about you and not about the buyers project. For me personal the many punctuation mistakes would be the first turn off.

I think that @pacquo made some very good suggestions.

  • Like 4
Link to comment
Share on other sites

The offer contains some punctuation and grammar errors.

The thing that irritates me the most is however the tone, the stance, the point of view.

You put openly your personal interest first.

Your job post has caught my attention

It should be the other way around.

I’m considering your job for me

Again, the game is that the buyer is evaluating you, not vice versa.

I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .

You have to prove that, but you can’t do it now.

Not a single line about the request of the buyer, you don’t even ask for more details.

I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

This is not the final straw just because you add something worse shortly after, for three times.

So, ORDER me now,

  1. It’s simply rude.

and Enjoy your Services.

  1. It’s just wrong.

I am really Expect that,

  1. It’s simply rude (and grammatically wrong, as the previous sentences).

Suggestions:

  1. Proofread the text.
  2. Say something about the request. Ask for more information if necessary.
  3. Explain some details of your offer (price, delivery time, possible alternatives). Nothing fancy.
  4. Be corteous.

Thank you so much.Realy helped me a lot

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

The offer contains some punctuation and grammar errors.

The thing that irritates me the most is however the tone, the stance, the point of view.

You put openly your personal interest first.

Your job post has caught my attention

It should be the other way around.

I’m considering your job for me

Again, the game is that the buyer is evaluating you, not vice versa.

I have done several projects like this . I have confident that I will do your work very well .

You have to prove that, but you can’t do it now.

Not a single line about the request of the buyer, you don’t even ask for more details.

I hope you would like my work and you will give me a good feedback which is very important for my future career in fiverr.

This is not the final straw just because you add something worse shortly after, for three times.

So, ORDER me now,

  1. It’s simply rude.

and Enjoy your Services.

  1. It’s just wrong.

I am really Expect that,

  1. It’s simply rude (and grammatically wrong, as the previous sentences).

Suggestions:

  1. Proofread the text.
  2. Say something about the request. Ask for more information if necessary.
  3. Explain some details of your offer (price, delivery time, possible alternatives). Nothing fancy.
  4. Be corteous.

The OP owes you a nice cup of

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Please sign in to comment

You will be able to leave a comment after signing in



Sign In Now
 Share

×
×
  • Create New...