alirforyou Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 HI FIVERR SENIOR PLEASE CHECK MY GIG IF ANY MODIFICATION PLEAS TELL MEstrong text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sara19841 Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Hi,Things I like:You’re using a photo of yourselfYour profile description reads pretty wellYour portfolio contains your own work and not pictures of templatesThings to work on:Change “dear sir/mum” to “dear sir/ma’am”.Format your gig description. It lets you down. It reads more like a poem. Remember, always use capital letters after a period. Always include a space after a comma. The pronoun “I” is always capitalized, as are names. Don’t randomly start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvy_khan Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Hi,Things I like:You’re using a photo of yourselfYour profile description reads pretty wellYour portfolio contains your own work and not pictures of templatesThings to work on:Change “dear sir/mum” to “dear sir/ma’am”.Format your gig description. It lets you down. It reads more like a poem. Remember, always use capital letters after a period. Always include a space after a comma. The pronoun “I” is always capitalized, as are names. Don’t randomly start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence.Hello,Sara, sorry for disturbing you, can you just evaluate my gigs and give some tips to do…! I am very disappointed because I didn’t get any order yet. Wating for your answer and thanks in advance. https://www.fiverr.com/alvy_khan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minahmmas Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Hello @alvy_khanI have also gone through your profiles. I don’t have any new suggestions for you but what @sara19841 has said.Good Luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvy_khan Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Hello @alvy_khanI have also gone through your profiles. I don’t have any new suggestions for you but what @sara19841 has said.Good LuckShe does not reply yet… If everything okay then why I do not get any order! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minahmmas Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 @alvy_khan,It’s very hard to get your first sale on any marketplace. Beside your skills, your luck is very essential to get your order. So, don’t stop your trying and of course keep patience on almighty. Hope, you will get your first sale soon.Good Luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvy_khan Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 @alvy_khan,It’s very hard to get your first sale on any marketplace. Beside your skills, your luck is very essential to get your order. So, don’t stop your trying and of course keep patience on almighty. Hope, you will get your first sale soon.Good LuckThank you for your kind information, keep me in your prayer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sara19841 Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Thank you for your kind information, keep me in your prayer.SEO is a very tough niche. The big boys dominate the market.Your gig has lots of potential. The only thing I would suggest is to make it clearer as to how your buyer benefits from purchasing your gig. At the moment, it’s not entirely clear how you’ll really help someone.In your keywords gig, for example, you only make one small mention of the fact your gig will help increase the buyer’s site ranking. The rest is just a list of features.Work out exactly how the buyer benefits from your gig, then describe how you’ll go about ensuring the buyer gets these benefits.For example, you might say… I will provide you with 100 long-tail keywords. These keywords will help you rank higher on Google, reach a wider audience, and make more money. I use state-of-the-art software to find keywords with very low competition. This means, regardless of your budget size, you’ll be able to able to achieve favourable search engine rankings QUICKLY – often within a month of two.Once your site has ranked highly, you’ll then see a 20% increase in social shares and revenue (on average).I have 5 years experience working as an SEO consultant, in which time I’ve helped over 200 people just like you achieve PR of 5 or higher. Noteable clients include… Blah blah blah.You see how being concrete about what you’ll deliver is more attractive than saying “I’ll do X, Y, Z… Buy now”? Nobody buys features, they buy what features will do for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sara19841 Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Ideally, you can be EVEN more specific than I just was, because I don’t really know anything about SEO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sha_innovator Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Hi,Things I like:You’re using a photo of yourselfYour profile description reads pretty wellYour portfolio contains your own work and not pictures of templatesThings to work on:Change “dear sir/mum” to “dear sir/ma’am”.Format your gig description. It lets you down. It reads more like a poem. Remember, always use capital letters after a period. Always include a space after a comma. The pronoun “I” is always capitalized, as are names. Don’t randomly start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence.hello,i hope you will be fine dear seniorI was wondering if you could checked out my Gigs.And give me some possible recommendation according to your well experience in fiver through which i can increase my sales.I shall be very thankful to you… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sara19841 Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 hello,i hope you will be fine dear seniorI was wondering if you could checked out my Gigs.And give me some possible recommendation according to your well experience in fiver through which i can increase my sales.I shall be very thankful to you…I’m no expert! I’m only sharing my thoughts, so everybody take them with a pinch of salt.I did check out your gigs, and I would suggest formatting your gig descriptions. They’re REALLY hard to read. Lots of bold, lots of underline, no spacing after paragraphs. I think if I were a buyer, I would probably just click to the next seller.I do like how your friendliness come across in your profile though. That’s a really big plus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sha_innovator Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 I’m no expert! I’m only sharing my thoughts, so everybody take them with a pinch of salt.I did check out your gigs, and I would suggest formatting your gig descriptions. They’re REALLY hard to read. Lots of bold, lots of underline, no spacing after paragraphs. I think if I were a buyer, I would probably just click to the next seller.I do like how your friendliness come across in your profile though. That’s a really big plus.Ok thank you so much for your information,So what should i do furthermore.I mean what kind of changes should i bring in itor should i summarise my description.Can you tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sara19841 Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Ok thank you so much for your information,So what should i do furthermore.I mean what kind of changes should i bring in itor should i summarise my description.Can you tell me what you thinkGet rid of most of the bold and the highlighting. Only save it for a phrase or two.Add in white space to make your descriptions easier to read. After each paragraph (each completed thought), leave a whole line of blank space. Kind of like what I’m doing here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sha_innovator Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Get rid of most of the bold and the highlighting. Only save it for a phrase or two.Add in white space to make your descriptions easier to read. After each paragraph (each completed thought), leave a whole line of blank space. Kind of like what I’m doing here.Ok thank you so much.Anyway what about my portfolio is it right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvy_khan Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 SEO is a very tough niche. The big boys dominate the market.Your gig has lots of potential. The only thing I would suggest is to make it clearer as to how your buyer benefits from purchasing your gig. At the moment, it’s not entirely clear how you’ll really help someone.In your keywords gig, for example, you only make one small mention of the fact your gig will help increase the buyer’s site ranking. The rest is just a list of features.Work out exactly how the buyer benefits from your gig, then describe how you’ll go about ensuring the buyer gets these benefits.For example, you might say… I will provide you with 100 long-tail keywords. These keywords will help you rank higher on Google, reach a wider audience, and make more money. I use state-of-the-art software to find keywords with very low competition. This means, regardless of your budget size, you’ll be able to able to achieve favourable search engine rankings QUICKLY – often within a month of two.Once your site has ranked highly, you’ll then see a 20% increase in social shares and revenue (on average).I have 5 years experience working as an SEO consultant, in which time I’ve helped over 200 people just like you achieve PR of 5 or higher. Noteable clients include… Blah blah blah.You see how being concrete about what you’ll deliver is more attractive than saying “I’ll do X, Y, Z… Buy now”? Nobody buys features, they buy what features will do for them.Said very well and I must say you just open my eyes. I’m a student of marketing professionals I know these things very well but I don’t know why I forgot to add these things to my gig…! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvy_khan Posted January 25, 2018 Share Posted January 25, 2018 Said very well and I must say you just open my eyes. I’m a student of marketing professionals I know these things very well but I don’t know why I forgot to add these things to my gig…!Thank you so much for sharing your views… @sara19841 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alirforyou Posted January 26, 2018 Author Share Posted January 26, 2018 Hi,Things I like:You’re using a photo of yourselfYour profile description reads pretty wellYour portfolio contains your own work and not pictures of templatesThings to work on:Change “dear sir/mum” to “dear sir/ma’am”.Format your gig description. It lets you down. It reads more like a poem. Remember, always use capital letters after a period. Always include a space after a comma. The pronoun “I” is always capitalized, as are names. Don’t randomly start a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence.sara thanks for you help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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