Can you help me improve my Fiverr gig?

[essayenthusiast]

I joined Fiverr last month, but have only just started getting into it. I found a few buyers from the ‘buyer requests’ section, and have only had one ‘organic’ order. I don’t know how that happened! That buyer must have had to scroll through about 50 pages before finding me.

[blaisefaint]

Dear Lizzy:

I took a quick look at your profile:

Run down the Improve My Gig Checklist ( 'http://forum.fiverr.com/t/improve-my-gig-checklist/84987` ). You’ve studied Fiverr Academy, listened to Fiverrcast or read the transcripts, studied the offerings on Fiverr in your niche, right?

If I started on this checklist for you…
Smiling in profile Image … NO
Professionally dressed in profile image … NO
Video in gigs … NO
YOU Appear in your video … NO
’https://forum.fiverr.com/t/ten-tips-to-optimize-your-gigs-create-trust-and-get-sales/165711`
Optimum use of Key Words …
Polished English grammar, punctuation, and spelling (try the Grammarly extension for your browser) …
Professional-quality copy in your gig description …
3 images in Live Portfolio that are custom to this gig and not just pulled from the web …
Read the Fiverr Terms of Service …
Able to point the Buyer to Appropriate Resources to Minimize Miscommunication / Cancellations …
Able to Communicate Clearly with Buyers …

In my opinion, your “proofread and edit” gig should be split into a “proofread” gig and an “edit” gig.

http://blog.fiverr.com/fiverrcast-episode-37-gig-best-practices-transcript/

Each Gig that you create on Fiverr should describe one type of service. We see certain sellers creating Gigs and we understand people are ambitious. They want to cram as much as possible into one Gig. So we see suggestions or we see Gig titles like – that says, “I will do anything you want for however amount of money.” I will do this or that, two different services, and that’s – while we understand kind of the why, why a seller would position their service like that, at essence Fiverr is a marketplace for Gigs which are defined tasks. They’re services with a beginning and an end.

You signed your name to your gig. I suggest you move or copy your name to your profile page.

Good luck,
Blaise