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[adeelmustafa01]

Hey guys, i have edited my proofreading gig, and would like to know your opinions.

https://www.fiverr.com/adeelmustafa01/proofread-and-criticise-your-writing?arrived_from_manage_gigs=true&display_share=true

Please tell me what you like and what you think i should change.

[adeelmustafa01]

bump, can someone please criticise:grin:

[somaginer1996]

I think you might have to be a little more specific about what makes each gig package distinct from another? Aka: “I’ll offer a critique at this price point!” Just saying “higher level” might not be specific enough.
You mention “colors and layout” in your description, but since you only specified proofreading and not reformatting I’m not sure that’s going to be something you’re encountering that much?
Also, this might just be a personal thing, but I think the gig description shouldn’t just be you describing how you’ll edit someone’s work. Most editing and proofreading follows the same procedure, so I doubt your buyers need to learn about that. Maybe just promise a great end product and talk about your qualifications?

[adeelmustafa01]

Thanks a lot i have changed it now, do you think it has improved?

[somaginer1996]

Haha, you’ll probably want a fresh pair of eyes on your gig to make sure 😛

[adeelmustafa01]

Haha, you’ll probably want a fresh pair of eyes on your gig to make sure 😛

True true, thanks anyway!