Would appreciate feedback on my Gig description

[guycraft]

Hi!
I recently changed my gig description in order to attract more buyers, I’d really appreciate some feedback.
Link to my Gig

As you can see, I’ve received a negative review from a recent buyer. I was unable to deliver on time due to personal reasons, therefore I changed my gig description to attract new buyers and provide as much information on my gig.

I’d really appreciate feedback and suggestions on my new gig description.

Thank you.