marioscuderi Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I’m a new user and I’ve set up a translation gig. I haven’t got any orders yet but it’s understandable. Can someone take a look at my gig and tell me where to improve? Also, what are buyers requests for? gig here https://www.fiverr.com/marioscuderi/italian-to-english-translation-and-vice-versa?funnel=30ce07ff-3ecb-4fd6-bb74-46ee4bd2f1cb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miroslavglavic Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I offer English to Italian translation of and vice-versa up to 500 words for 5$. I will translateRemove the ofThe end - I will translate is useless since it is not needed as we know you will translate because you said you offer E2I traslation.Traditionally the dollar sign is before the number. so $5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dijatul Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Do as mentioned you @miroslavglavic… Just follow him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioscuderi Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 I offer English to Italian translation of and vice-versa up to 500 words for 5$. I will translateRemove the ofThe end - I will translate is useless since it is not needed as we know you will translate because you said you offer E2I traslation.Traditionally the dollar sign is before the number. so $5Thank you for the help! Not to bother you any further but do you know why my buyer requests are not updating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wanderingshrew Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Hi there.First of all, are you saying that you are only 10 years or so old? If yes, that is fantastic. If not, why mention the age of living in England and not mentioning how long you’ve been living in Italy?Mentioning that you have practiced English for x number of years even while living in Italy would help you.I have corrected a couple of spelling errors and here is how I would list your gig:Hello!I offer English to Italian translation and vice-versa up to 500 words for only $5.Here are some examples of what I can translate for you:• Presentations• Essays• Lectures• Articles and blogs• Sales pages• Just about anything elseAll translations are done within 24 hoursWhen translating your document:• I will keep in mind the context and the flow of the text.• I will not simplify or compromise the integrity of your text to make things easier. All the details will be left untouched.• I will not use any software because it is unnecessary and translation software is no match for an actual human translation.If you have a particularly long or technical text, please contact me for a custom offer and a delivery time evaluation.About me:I have lived in England for 3 years, between the ages of 6 and 9, during which period I learned the English language. Now I live in Italy and I have earned the First Certificate by the Cambridge Language Assessment (see profile).Thank you!Hope it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioscuderi Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 Hi there.First of all, are you saying that you are only 10 years or so old? If yes, that is fantastic. If not, why mention the age of living in England and not mentioning how long you’ve been living in Italy?Mentioning that you have practiced English for x number of years even while living in Italy would help you.I have corrected a couple of spelling errors and here is how I would list your gig:Hello!I offer English to Italian translation and vice-versa up to 500 words for only $5.Here are some examples of what I can translate for you:• Presentations• Essays• Lectures• Articles and blogs• Sales pages• Just about anything elseAll translations are done within 24 hoursWhen translating your document:• I will keep in mind the context and the flow of the text.• I will not simplify or compromise the integrity of your text to make things easier. All the details will be left untouched.• I will not use any software because it is unnecessary and translation software is no match for an actual human translation.If you have a particularly long or technical text, please contact me for a custom offer and a delivery time evaluation.About me:I have lived in England for 3 years, between the ages of 6 and 9, during which period I learned the English language. Now I live in Italy and I have earned the First Certificate by the Cambridge Language Assessment (see profile).Thank you!Hope it helpsWOW! Thank you! This is great! It’s soooo cool that people put in so much work to help others! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wanderingshrew Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 WOW! Thank you! This is great! It’s soooo cool that people put in so much work to help others!Any time, my friend. In fact, I will probably order a gig from you in a few days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioscuderi Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 Any time, my friend. In fact, I will probably order a gig from you in a few days.This is going beyond any expectations! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omorfaruk1124 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I have five gig that are created with different skilled. But there is no order yet. Can some one take at my gig?###https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bmamran Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 You can send some buyer request to them who buy the gig look like yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sassyhallelujah Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I have five gig that are created with different skilled. But there is no order yet. Can some one take at my gig?###https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124Your description says: “I am done with full quality”Do you mean that you will complete the task in the highest quality available? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sassyhallelujah Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I’m a new user and I’ve set up a translation gig. I haven’t got any orders yet but it’s understandable. Can someone take a look at my gig and tell me where to improve? Also, what are buyers requests for? gig here https://www.fiverr.com/marioscuderi/italian-to-english-translation-and-vice-versa?funnel=30ce07ff-3ecb-4fd6-bb74-46ee4bd2f1cbhttps://www.fiverr.com/marioscuderi/italian-to-english-translation-and-vice-versa?funnel=30ce07ff-3ecb-4fd6-bb74-46ee4bd2f1cbYou may benefit from adding a description of yourself to your profile.I am a new seller, also; but, I think that may help. 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marioscuderi Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 https://www.fiverr.com/marioscuderi/italian-to-english-translation-and-vice-versa?funnel=30ce07ff-3ecb-4fd6-bb74-46ee4bd2f1cbYou may benefit from adding a description of yourself to your profile.I am a new seller, also; but, I think that may help. 🙂In the portfolio section? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lloydsolutions Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I have five gig that are created with different skilled. But there is no order yet. Can some one take at my gig?###https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124You need to create your own heading in the category “Improve My Gig” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omorfaruk1124 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124Your description says: “I am done with full quality”Do you mean that you will complete the task in the highest quality available?Certainly, I’ll try my level best to done the task with full quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wanderingshrew Posted March 18, 2017 Share Posted March 18, 2017 I have five gig that are created with different skilled. But there is no order yet. Can some one take at my gig?###https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124Hi Omor,All of your descriptions are in choppy English. While you may be very good at what you do, most English speaking marketers will steer away from a gig that is written in improper English.To start with: Change “I’ll satisfied you with best quality” to "I will satisfy you with the best quality"I would change your general description for all of your gigs to the following:Welcome to my page.My name is Omor Faruk. I work both offline and online and provide customers different types of professional services with the best quality in each area.When you place an order for any of my gigs, I will deliver the work on time and with your full satisfaction guaranteed. I am looking forward to working with you.All of your headings for each individual gig need to be changed as well:I will do spreadsheet data entryI will remove watermarks from up to 10 imagesI will remove background from any imageI will design a perfect business card for youI will research and collect any data for youThat is just the headings but those are the most important ones. The individual descriptions for each gig could use some help also.Hope it helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omorfaruk1124 Posted March 18, 2017 Share Posted March 18, 2017 Hi Omor,All of your descriptions are in choppy English. While you may be very good at what you do, most English speaking marketers will steer away from a gig that is written in improper English.To start with: Change “I’ll satisfied you with best quality” to "I will satisfy you with the best quality"I would change your general description for all of your gigs to the following:Welcome to my page.My name is Omor Faruk. I work both offline and online and provide customers different types of professional services with the best quality in each area.When you place an order for any of my gigs, I will deliver the work on time and with your full satisfaction guaranteed. I am looking forward to working with you.All of your headings for each individual gig need to be changed as well:I will do spreadsheet data entryI will remove watermarks from up to 10 imagesI will remove background from any imageI will design a perfect business card for youI will research and collect any data for youThat is just the headings but those are the most important ones. The individual descriptions for each gig could use some help also.Hope it helps.Dear wanderingshrew http://forum.fiverr.com/users/wanderingshrew,Thank you so much for giving valuable guidance.Sincerely,Omor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omorfaruk1124 Posted March 19, 2017 Share Posted March 19, 2017 Hi Omor,All of your descriptions are in choppy English. While you may be very good at what you do, most English speaking marketers will steer away from a gig that is written in improper English.To start with: Change “I’ll satisfied you with best quality” to "I will satisfy you with the best quality"I would change your general description for all of your gigs to the following:Welcome to my page.My name is Omor Faruk. I work both offline and online and provide customers different types of professional services with the best quality in each area.When you place an order for any of my gigs, I will deliver the work on time and with your full satisfaction guaranteed. I am looking forward to working with you.All of your headings for each individual gig need to be changed as well:I will do spreadsheet data entryI will remove watermarks from up to 10 imagesI will remove background from any imageI will design a perfect business card for youI will research and collect any data for youThat is just the headings but those are the most important ones. The individual descriptions for each gig could use some help also.Hope it helps.Sir,I have a problem. After editing according to your instruction my gigs on the online is not show. #https://www.fiverr.com/users/omorfaruk1124 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chanwinmark Posted March 24, 2017 Share Posted March 24, 2017 Can anyone pls. check my gigs, I am beginner in Fiverr so I don’t want to do yet?https://www.fiverr.com/chanwinmark/make-a-logo-design?display_share=true&arrived_from_share_todo=true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
striderzero Posted March 24, 2017 Share Posted March 24, 2017 I’m a new user and I’ve set up a translation gig. I haven’t got any orders yet but it’s understandable. Can someone take a look at my gig and tell me where to improve? Also, what are buyers requests for? gig here https://www.fiverr.com/marioscuderi/italian-to-english-translation-and-vice-versa?funnel=30ce07ff-3ecb-4fd6-bb74-46ee4bd2f1cbYou can change your gig title to “translate Italian to English and English to Italian” in order to increase your gig’s appearance in search. Also try replacing the tags “manually” and “fast” with “English” and “Italian” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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